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productivity. it's a funny word, really. like all other words, when you say it enough times, it begins to lose its meaning.

more voyeur fic. for [livejournal.com profile] fuschia. this isn't exactly snape slash... and it exceeds 100 words. but hope it works for you.

watching

The time to do the proper thing in this situation had long since expired. He was stuck here now. Idiotic boys. Who would wander into the potions dungeons, for this purpose, and not check that the room was completely empty? Perhaps they had assumed that if Professor Snape had indeed been in the supply closet, he would have stormed out and chastised them as soon as he heard them. Yes, that would have been the proper thing to do.

They certainly made enough noise, glued together at the face, crashing into chairs as they made their clumsy way toward his desk. His desk! His desk was now covered by Malfoy’s bare back. His quill was being crushed by Potter’s knee. But there was nothing for it now. Nothing without admitting he’d been in here for a good seven minutes, silent and watching.

There were limits, however. There were things he most certainly would not do. His cheeks would remain pale. No blood could color skin this shade of white. His hands would remain outside his robes. And the door would remain as it had been – only open the smallest crack.

It was enough to see Potter holding Malfoy down. He wouldn’t have guessed Malfoy would be so acquiescent. Or Potter so domineering. But that shouldn’t surprise him. It doesn’t surprise him. Nor does the smug grin on Potter’s face when Malfoy shouts. The grin is disturbingly familiar. Snape breathes a barely audible sigh of relief when Malfoy reaches for Potter’s face and pulls off his glasses. He looks so much less like his father without them. Slowly, silently, Snape closes the door.

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Date: 2002-12-04 10:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starbuckle.livejournal.com
oh this is brilliant. you and your voyeur!Fics -- they're all amazing. i love snape's voice here, the perfect mask of denial. and the line about harry looking less like his dad sans glasses? brilliant.

i adore you.

now where's my hermione/eowyn? ;)

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Date: 2002-12-04 11:03 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] phineasjones.livejournal.com
kisskisskiss! thanks, love.

and i mutually adore you!

AND - your hermione/eowyn is up!

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Date: 2002-12-04 10:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camillafarfalla.livejournal.com
Fucking hell. Gah. This is really seriously amazing. Wow. Good freakin' job. Yep. Very very impressed. That's all.

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Date: 2002-12-04 11:02 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] phineasjones.livejournal.com
of course she likes the one with the h/d in it. :)

still, i got a 'gah' out of you. ::prances around::

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Date: 2002-12-04 11:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camillafarfalla.livejournal.com
of course she likes the one with the h/d in it.
Well duh. Embracing my OTP, baby! *g*

Your other drabbles are also excellent; I'm, again, very very impressed. Not least with the prolificness (not a word). And they're just so good. Hmm, I suppose I could request a drabble too, since I did read your whole CoS post... :) I mean, if you feel like it... that'd be an H/D, or, as discussed, Dan/Lij, but since your D/E muse is gone, I don't want to push it. *g again* lalala!

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Date: 2002-12-04 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fuschia.livejournal.com
I am breathless from this fic! Thank you so much...and I never knew how much I, also, could like a dominant Harry...

HUGS!!!!

SQUEE!

Fuschia

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Date: 2002-12-04 12:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] phineasjones.livejournal.com
yay! glad you liked it!
wheeeee! dominant!harry.

i just can't stop with the drabbling today!
::hugs::

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Date: 2002-12-04 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] addictedkitten.livejournal.com
Okay, yeah, wow, that really worked for me. I mean, there was just nothing here I didn't like. Snape as a voyeur- yes. Harry and Draco getting feisty on Snape's desk- yes. The way Snape doesn't stop them- yes. Just all wonderful, and great.

His desk was now covered by Malfoy’s bare back. His quill was being crushed by Potter’s knee.

Yes. That just took me to such a happy place. And with the domineering Potter, this is good. I like this. I'm lying, I love this. It is great.

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Date: 2002-12-05 12:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] phineasjones.livejournal.com
yay! oh thank you! such lovely words of praise. ::big goofy smile::

yeah, domineering potter... i wish there were a lot more of him around. hard to really do it and keep him in character, i guess... but... still. good.

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