Oh, this is so lovely and phrased just right in places, and even without the music on, I can feel the undercurrent of the song.
oh, that makes me very happy. the song was very much in my mind while i was writing.
Randomly, to end, and I'm plucking things out of the air here, but the watery tea reminds me of "Out of Habit" as well (by ani) - "and the coffee is just water dressed in brown"
oooh. i wish i could say that had been intentional. that's one of my very favorite songs of hers.
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Date: 2004-11-16 05:26 am (UTC)oh, that makes me very happy. the song was very much in my mind while i was writing.
Randomly, to end, and I'm plucking things out of the air here, but the watery tea reminds me of "Out of Habit" as well (by ani) - "and the coffee is just water dressed in brown"
oooh. i wish i could say that had been intentional. that's one of my very favorite songs of hers.
thanks for venturing out to read this fic! ;)