brilliant and sweet and simple. I love the sparseness of the plot, in that I can picture the entire lead-up, imagine the scene earlier, the conversation or lack of it, but we didn't need to see it, and you created it in just a few words. And I love how the atmosphere changes with just one "Ok."
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Date: 2004-08-04 10:38 pm (UTC)Yay.