This is great, and there's so much here - Ray realising that Fraser is yanking his chain for a bit of back-and-forth after three days of Ray following directions; Ray's restraint from his victory wiggle (I can so see that in my head!); the long moments of stillness with Fraser asking Ray in silence what he wants; the mutual acknowledgement that it's more than sex they are after. You get a lot done in a few words, and it's just lovely!
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Date: 2007-06-21 09:07 am (UTC)