Oh. So beautiful. And so *hot*. I really love the transition from annoyance to frantic coupling to that soft, sweet last paragraph. In lesser hands the effect might be a bit jarring, but you manage to navigate all that tricky terrain and evoke exactly the right emotions. It's lovely stuff, and you are a very skilled and special talent. Thanks so much for posting!
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Date: 2007-06-05 09:15 pm (UTC)