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2007-06-05 05:53 pm (UTC)
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So, so nice. I love the pacing and the depth of this story. It turned out really well. Yay!
There's a typo in the paragraph that begins "Ray tightens his fingers a pulls gently, urging Fraser up and off him." It should be "and" there not "a".
And, um, aren't you supposed to tag somebody?
::hugs you::
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Date: 2007-06-05 05:53 pm (UTC)There's a typo in the paragraph that begins "Ray tightens his fingers a pulls gently, urging Fraser up and off him." It should be "and" there not "a".
And, um, aren't you supposed to tag somebody?
::hugs you::