phineasjones

WttRW is best at its beginning - I liked the premise of scaredinsecure!Draco, and Harry's life with the bookstore etc., and the angst of their comfort with and need for each other's presence. The last four or five chapters have gone from refreshing to annoying to me - really the second-to-last started bugging me bc, okay, get it on already, I mean really. Nothing was really happening and I wasn't convinced enough by Harry's issues or whatever as to why they were only kissing. We're finally getting somewhere in the last-posted chapter, so maybe the whole thing will pick up from here - though really it should probably just finish. Anyway, those are my caveats for the thing... Yeah, and there's that bad-writing feature that keeps popping up too. Nonetheless, I feel like it's my own little Seeker to Seeker, and if I had a following like Ivy, I'd rec it out to the masses. *g*